The brush strokes of eternity.
There was a light so long ago That showed me all I need to know, Upon my journey softly shone When every trace of day was gone, And evening's charcoal crochet shawl Traced gently on my sacred wall,...
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first... a big *SIGH* This is lovely, Keith Especially enjoyed the following lines: "And on the lines of light and shade I'll paint the dreams of you I've made, With brush strokes from the heart of me...
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Keith, Deft brush strokes paint a lovely picture. You are a talented artisan! sarah
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Keith, there are so many examples of filtered light in this. I love it...Ed
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It ia amazing how many ways you write of scenery and romance Keith. Always fresh and new. I also love the stanza that Jody chose.
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I agree with what has alread been said Keith. It's another beauty! Well done
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Keith, Congrats. Sometimes a poem slips through the cracks and does not get the comments it deserves. This is one of those. It is no one's fault except perhaps the phenomenom of too little time in our...
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Hi Kieth...this is such a beautiful poem that I found myself reading it several times. You have made excellent word choices that lend so much charm to this piece...wonderful! chey
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